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Jane and I (Morgen Bailey) announced the critique competition earlier this week and we had a query from an applicant regarding the word count of the synopsis. I confirmed that the maximum word counts are fixed (listed below) so it’s fair on everyone. I’m the administrator of this competition and any submissions received over these word counts will be disqualified… and yes, I will be checking!
- Novel beginning extract: 1,000 words maximum;
- Synopsis (including the ending): 250 words maximum;
- Author biography (third-person viewpoint): 250 words maximum;
This is the advice I gave the applicant:
I usually recommend starting with a 50- or 100-word max synopsis and work outwards, e.g. ‘From waring families, Romeo & Juliet know they can’t be together but marry in secret. The feuding escalates and confusion arises, but Juliet is offered a drug to fake her own death, with a message being sent to Romeo of the plan. A servant tells him of her ‘death’ and Romeo kills himself so he can join her. She wakes and finds him so stabs herself. Their deaths bring the families together and peace is restored.’
From an elevator pitch (imagine you have the agent to yourself and can tell him / her about your novel but only during the time it takes an elevator / lift to travel three floors) – tell us the main characters’ names (four / five maximum) and build on a few words of the plot (including the ending) from there.
- write a tagline (10 words maximum) e.g. 31 men in 31 days – what could possibly go wrong?
- Now expand your tagline to the 50-100 word elevator pitch and you may find that’s enough. The 250 words, after all, is a maximum, not a target.
- Read your submission (the synopsis, biography and novel extract) out loud. Does it make sense? Are there any errors that you may not have spotted when reading it inside your head? Now is the time to amend them, not once you’ve hit the submit button.
I blogging about pitching to agents for the lit fest blog on 22nd January, which you can read here.
As per any other competition, we can’t get into discussions about your content, but equally we want the rules to be clear and achievable. Good luck!
The details of the competition itself are on https://wannabeawritertvshow.com/chipping-norton-literature-festival-competition.
ITEM: A copy each of Wannabe a Writer? and Wannabe a Writer We’ve Heard Of? (Not to be mistaken for the same thing!) Signed to you or a friend (think useful Christmas gift for someone misguided enough to want to join the ranks)
PLUS half an hour of telephone or skype writing* advice – which can be a general chat or feedback on a short story or first chapter of a novel.
* NB: I am a frustrated agony aunt proper – if you want to spill the beans about your complex personal life instead, that’s fine too. 🙂
Yes – here is part two of the Wannabeawriter TV show and I so hope you enjoy it. Please leave a comment, please tell your friends, and if you fancy being on a future programme then do fill in the application form. 🙂
Thank you again for all the great comments and enthusiasm we’ve received so far – we are hugely grateful.
all best and happy writing
PS and while I’m at it, this is a great campaign too. www.booksaremybag.com
I was at the fab launch at Foyles last week and think the whole concept is a stroke of genius, frankly….
Thank you so much for all the comments so far – please keep ’em coming. Thanks also to all those who’ve applied to come on a future show. We’ve had some great responses and the more the merrier. Thrilled with the feedback to-date and hoping the hits on YouTube will keep on climbing. So do please tell your friends… 🙂
thanks again, jane xx
Thrilled to say – Here We Are! The long awaited (by me, anyway) TV Pilot of Wannabe a Writer? Please watch the first part of the programme, have a poke around the blog (for which I am so grateful, as always, to the ever-brilliant Morgen Bailey ) and let us know what you think!
Thanks for visiting – look forward to hearing from you